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chasmflight2 by Appletail chasmflight2 by Appletail
i didn't want to spoil it but i need help with the background :P

offer what help you can give and i'll go from there
i'm going to finish it tomorrow because i got mad at it XD

background! not the dragons!
redo of this
Very beautiful. I love the way the dragons are drawn and that it's all dark but the sky is like a sunset or a sunrise. I've never really given a critique before but this really caught my eye. Very nice job. :) The way the dragons were drawn (at least the ones on top) are drawn in your own style and I really love it.

Umm, I haven't gotten the 100 words yet...How come for the water (is that what it is?) on the bottom and the edge of the orange sky done like it was just thrown on there? I like how it looks I was just curious.
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Appletail Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Filmographer
update: deleted all the background except the part the furry dragon is laying on

but it's more or less gonna be the same, just...actually drawn.. xD i just copy/pasted and stretched the same chunk of ground he's laying on to make the walls of the chasm n stuff |D
Kallicalico Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Honestly, I think what you have going on with the background so far is pretty good. >: I think you just need a break from this for tonight. xD Just remember to keep the shadows and lighting consistent...
Appletail Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Filmographer
this is true... i'll limit myself to one copy-paste of rocks x3
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